Pornographic Story I

Writing a sensual poetry
is to experience a succession of pleasures…


In loving silence of the night
We lie awake in blissful flight
Our souls are bare and we are one
Until the rising of the sun

You touched my lips and I replied
I kissed you when the candle died
Darkness wrapped our naked heat
As we flow in gentle fleet

I knew each every little you
As you unveiled my secrets too
We played the music of the moon
And felt the rush of our love soon

Soaked in rain, the fire died
The night left none for us to hide
Our souls are bare and we are one
Until the rising sun…

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25 thoughts on “Pornographic Story I

  1. putragis. ayos tong poem na to. walang eroticness pero sensual. šŸ˜€

    poet, keep writing. šŸ˜€

    +++
    @ oddblood:
    haha. salamat sa effort magbasa at magcomment sa entry kong basura. XP

    ewan ko ba, tuwing madaling araw hanggang tanghaling tapat lang ako nakakapagsulat ng maayos. sans the grammar syempre! haha.

    laging may bukas. sabi nga ni santino. yay!

    ps. add na kita sa blogroll ko. wether you like it or you like it.

    • hehe..salamat..’lam mo ba nabasa na ng Mama ko ‘yan nang minsang makita niya ang journal ko..waah! pero cool lang, alam naman niyang mahilig akong magsulat ng kung ano ano.. hehe..at tungkol naman sa mga posts mo, okei naman..maganda..’wag masyadong critical ‘pag nagsusulat..just write. revisions or corrections will follow..good grammar won’t compensate for a stale composition, but with good ideas & truthfulness, even a grammatically ill composition will still be worth reading.. ^_^ right?

    • waw..that’s interesting..nagsusulat ka din pala ng mga “E” rated poems..hehe..it soesn’t necessarily be true naman kasi, unlike writing personal poems..kailangan lang imagination and “know how”.. haha.. XD

  2. Kung hihimayhimayin mo, dun mo talaga mapapansin na may sexual ingredient sa tula.. pero actually, na conceal mo pa nga kahit papaano yung message! ayos! hm, pag tula, iba iba ang paraan ko ng pagbasa.. hehe. actually, binasa ko siya pataas, okay din.. parang ginawa lang nila sa tanghaling tapat. try mo basahin from end line to the first line.

    minsan binabasa ko ang tula ng hindi sunod sunod..

    as what the book had taught me, attack on all angles! hehe.

    • oo nga, may mga stanzas na pwedeng basahin pabaliktad, and still make sense ah..okei yun ah.. ^_^
      newey, isa yan sa mga favorite na tula ko na nagawa ko noong 1sr year college ako..dati nga ayokong ishare dahil parang “funny” pero noong binasa ko naman eh parang okei naman.. šŸ˜€

    • yeah, the warm colors used & the theme of the painting merged perfectly, creating a very sensuous piece I couldn’t help my mind wander under the sheets! haha.. ^_^

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