pornographic story…

I made this poem when I was in first year college. No other person has read this one, but I just feel like posting it now because there isn’t anything funny about it, i think. *wink*

In loving silence of the night
We lie awake in blissful light
Our souls are bare and we are one
Until the rising of the sun
You touched my lips and I replied
I kissed you when the candle died
Darkness wrapped our naked heat
As we flow in gentle fleet
I knew each every little you
As you unveiled my secrets too
We played the music of the moon
And felt the rush of our love soon
Soaked in rain, the fire died
The night left none for us to hide
Our souls are bare and we are one
Until the rising sun..

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3 thoughts on “pornographic story…

  1. nice piece here….

    i would suggest the last line to be

    “Until the rising of the sun” – to be perfectly metered to the second to the last line…. ^^

    the thoughts are beautiful, though its not pornographic…^^
    i know the inspiration of this, am i right?

    your a good poet..

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